22
Mar
10

Blog #13

After combining my three papers together, I have transitioned from one portion of the paper to the next relatively smoothly in my opinion. After combing the papers I had to change a few sentences in order make the smooth transition possible. At this point in time, my introduction and lit review need some editing in order to ensure they are error free and flow smoothly.

My biggest worry is that my first two sections do not meet my standards of writing now so I need to shape them and add extra information to completely cover eberything I want to. I also want to find some more articles pertaining to what is percieved as visually beautiful outside of human characteristics because some of the photographs I have taken are not of people. From here I need to research more and untimately review my paper as much as possible. I also need to go to the writing center to ensure that my work is gramatically correct.

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1 Response to “Blog #13”


  1. March 26, 2010 at 3:55 pm

    I feel the same way you do about combining all three section. At the same time I feel that I have too much information. I also have to go to the writing center for help.


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